See there is this boy,
I'm sure you've heard me
talk about him, his
name is Troy.
He lives so far away,
And i just want to be with
him night and day.
I feel so all alone,
Like my world is tossed
around into a big cyclone.
I feel as if noone understands,
I just need someone to feel me
as if they knew what i was going
through,just be there and hold my hands.
I live in Georgia and him
in Nebraska,
But sometimes it feels futher away
as if he were somwhere in Alaska.
It's just so hard to find someone
to talk to at times,
So i write all my feelings down in
these silly little ryhmes.
Hoping one day we'll be together,
Inspite the things we have been
though,i'm sure we will be one in one
standing against the backs of one another
no matter the weather.
Author notes
Was feeling a bit low, Feeling as if noone
would understand what i am going through.
Just wanted to know if someone was out there i could talk to . 
A contest entry
- Finally Someone To Talk To by storiesuntold.
450 points, ended September 2, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think. Was feeling a bit down. wanting someone to talk to,
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SAD
You can talk to me anytime!!!!! I can tell that you are down and out by your penning. It has sadness written all over it. Long distance love is very difficult. Good luck withn that, and with the contest! Great write!
POETDONTKNOWIT
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Why thank you kind friend, that means alot to me.
-Mandi
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awwww i like that!
u can talk to me! i am here!
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Awe, why thank you hun.
If i need you i'll be sure to message you up for sure.
you know i will!
-Mandi
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Loves embrace from afar is the most deepest of all
Often when love is seperated by miles it strengthens the feeling so that you can almost feel his breath upon your neck your senses are so much more in tune than if he were right there in person . Yes love where the roots of love entertwines with the miles of freeways and the moon you both shares seems so much larger than any other time . I hear you for a time my husband was in Jamaica and I was still in Texas its a feeling no one knows unless they have been there and knows the heart and the mind feels such need and when grasping in just air it does hurt deeply. Never give up hope and if you can find a way to reach him by mail or phone just to hear his voice and he hear yours . I so understand that even a little while feels like an eternity. I wish you luck and the rejoining in time with a love so strong and pure
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Thank you for that sweet and endearing comment, thats twice you have brightened my day/night up.
You just don't know how much this comment actually meant to me.
I will forever hold that in my heart.
Thank you so much! You are a very kind a sweet person .
A dozen
's to you.
-Mandi
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