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I know nothing of~

Goodnight~
Sweet whispers from your tongue
I do lack
And your sweet melody played out against me
from trembling fingers that dance against tender skin

I know nothing of~
convent of darkness, wrapped in silk
A sacred dance
Of which neither of us have ever known
the blessing of speaking well into morn.
Till sunrise kiss everything hidden inside
Still I see the sun in your smile

And I feel it in your passing of goodbye

No perhaps its not forever
Maybe
For this day only we are in love
Till silence greets us in the serenity of passing windows
as we gaze
lost in this blissful melody.

But of every sweet goodnight whispers neither of us have ever known
that fall from twisted and tangled tongue


I know nothing of~

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  • Knight70 silver member
    September 10

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    Love has a tendency to feel this way.

    This reminds me that there really is no such thing as a perfect love. We certainly should aspire to reach it, but not at the expense of losing track of whom we gaze upon till morn. Every moment captured is bliss. This probably made no sense. I'm sleepy tonight, Melissa.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    September 4
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    Lovely

    So much we go through life with out knowing but we may be the better for it.

  • This is such a beautiful write. You have done so well here and this was such a pleasure to read. The imagery here was outstanding. Well done


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      August 31
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      Barely~

      Thank you so very much, and thank you for reading me..
      Many blessings
      Asdzaa~

  • This was as beautifully touching as when first I read it! That pic is simply breath taking. Blessed once again by your gentle poetic grace...



    Blessed be Sis~
    Az


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    April 18

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    This is just one of the most beautiful pieces I have read, of longing and wanting and love. You capture it all so perfectly and beautifully. Well done

    • Autumn Gypsy

      I thank you so very much for this beautiful comment...

      Many blessings
      ~A~

  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    Oh sister fair! How this speaks to my heart this night! Your words have come to me in the perfect time. Blessed be your tender soul poetess of wonder and grace!

    I love your page as well Sis!


    Az


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 22, 2008

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    beautiful melody that one can dance with in the shadow. Always a safe and nice place to have even if it isn't forever. Sometimes it is just that simple bliss that one needs to escape the twisted and tangled tongue. Love your poem, made me smile...have missed you soooooooooooooo much sissy! love you! ~Trisha~

    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      October 22, 2008
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      Trisha~

      Awe you are so sweet...and thank you so much for adding such beauty to my page....
      I miss our chats, your kinda fun..hehe..shh
      of course I adore you~

      Much love and many blessings
      Sister ~A~


  • jazzcat gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    A beautiful write! I thought the last half of this was stronger than the first, but it was all good. Your rhythm and tone were just what this piece needed and you carried your readers through with passion and hope.


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      October 7, 2008
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      Jazzcat~

      I do thank you for your beautiful comment...smiles
      Thank you for reading me...
      Many blessings
      ~A~


  • Chindi Yaz
    September 18, 2008

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    wow. ugh i am such a bad anna-person cos i have not been around to read ur fabulous pennings. i am sorry and i truly am missing out. awesome missa. ily.
    --Your Anna


  • LifeTourist
    September 15, 2008
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    lovely flow

    love this one poet, so passionate...andy


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      September 15, 2008
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      Andy~

      Thank you so very much, so nice to see you here again...smiles
      Many blessings to you and yours
      ~A~


  • Grateful
    September 1, 2008

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    lovely poem...

    "A sacred dance
    Of which neither of us have ever known"

    just beautiful...there are so many other lines are also great...i really enjoyed it...


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      September 7, 2008
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      Grateful~

      Thank you so very much for reading me and for this beautiful comment...
      Many blessings
      ~A~

  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    August 26, 2008
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    So lovely this sweet portrait in words! My heart and eyes danced through your thoughts and were delighted!

    Blessed be Sis~
    Az


  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    This is a brilliant pairing of susurrous language
    and sensual feel. I love the sense of giving oneself
    over completely to something, even if most of that
    something remains in shadow. I guess you knew I would respond to this one! Beautiful and intimate, Blue


    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      August 20, 2008
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      Smiles~

      My lovely Blue, you leave me with a huge smile.
      Thank you my dear...
      Many blessings
      ~A~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Brilliant Sis,

    You amaze me each time I read your wonderful works.
    How you are so unique from what I often read. -refreshing-
    Thanks for sharing, and I know nothing of is awesome!

    Love brother and friend, Timothy

    • Asdzaa Nadleehe
      August 19, 2008

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      Tim~

      Hugs...
      thank you my dear brother...smiles

      So nice that you are here...you do make me blush...just a tinge...lol

      Many blessings to you and yours...
      I do adore your soul~
      ~A~


  • JohnnyD gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Now "that" is one extraordinarily beautiful write there gal! of its context I do not believe I've seen one even half as good anywhere else, AP or other sites I know of.

    You did not pen this with your fingertips but rather with your heart, and it shows so very well indeed.

    Bravo! Belisimo!



    len

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