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Haiku

Death chokes my insides,
Yet no one notices me
Grinning life away.

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  • BattleOfBlood
    August 24, 2008

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    Give me a call

    I know how you feel, and I love you. I hope you know im still here for you, anytime day or night. Within those dark nights of the soul, a new sun dawns, you just need to look up and beyond that gloomy horizon.
    Blessed be,
    LeFay