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The one I chose to call me

Eyes of an unseen victim
Downing deep in a self holding pain
Wise for one so young
But pained by life’s treasures

Lips never to be opened
Sewn together by the thread of life
Truth never to be spoken
So no one can know the person within

Ears hearing past all the lies
Uncovering what you haven’t told me
My hands will stop all the noise
So I don’t go crazy from things that shouldn’t be said

Hair as dark as night
Distracting you from all my features
So no one can look through the fake expression
The one I chose to call me

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meh, i wrote this quickly... umm not much to say, so please enjoy

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  • Dark Prince Chaos
    August 20, 2008

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    beautiful write i realy love it you have such talent in poetry you contenu to amaze me my dark angel -bows- great work sis much love ^_^