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Life

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Living Is Free Expression
Instantly working to make a living
Freely doing what you want to do
Enjoying every day that is given

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Life spelled down the side and across the top

The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture by: Marcella Muhammad

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    August 27, 2009

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    An Acrostic!

    Ah..you wrote a poem I can comment on! Joshing you here, but I'm a Minister & you write a lot of 'Adult'/'Erotic' poems that I don't read. This is a lovely presentation & oh that it were always true. Many times we're not 'freely' doing what we want to do. Oh well. Love the way this flows & the optimistic sentiment of it. Regardless of the circumstances we should always endeavor to enjoy the day that is given! BTW...that's a great picture!


  • lilAj
    September 1, 2008

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    a meaningful Acrostic you;ve penned here mizz ... chocolate
    the first line excelently sums up the theme, a rather multidimensional and hard subject to wite on, and in such brevity
    Aj~


  • Tink24
    August 29, 2008
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    omg so short but told alot thats nice


  • cre8tiv-writer
    August 27, 2008

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    Oh, the picture and writing coincide beautifully. The way you used the word life surrounding the poem...genius!


  • whos my humblepie
    August 26, 2008
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    Love it all.
    the phot is great,
    really beautiful.


  • A-Cinnamon-Spider
    August 26, 2008
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    Very creative! I enjoyed the message as well


  • Em
    August 25, 2008
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    I love that it has meaning and power within such few words... and the creativity it took to do so!


  • Grateful
    August 24, 2008
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    very inspiring and noble poem you have here...great job..i am glad i read it...all the best...

  • naturelover007 silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Nice acrostic on Life...

    babby


  • nevadapoet
    August 23, 2008
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    Touche'...great inspirational advise for the young and old. Thanks for the reminder.
    Nevadapoet


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    August 22, 2008

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    very nice poem here you did a very great excellent job with this write this was a pleasure to read


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    August 20, 2008
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    Lovely Acrostics honey

    gr8t job

    -e

  • mcfreeman
    August 20, 2008
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    Zen pen friend


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    very good

    nice acrostic my friend!

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