Living Is Free Expression
Instantly working to make a living
Freely doing what you want to do
Enjoying every day that is given
Instantly working to make a living
Freely doing what you want to do
Enjoying every day that is given
Author notes
Life spelled down the side and across the top
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture by: Marcella Muhammad
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An Acrostic!
Ah..you wrote a poem I can comment on!
Joshing you here, but I'm a Minister & you write a lot of 'Adult'/'Erotic' poems that I don't read. This is a lovely presentation & oh that it were always true. Many times we're not 'freely' doing what we want to do.
Oh well.
Love the way this flows & the optimistic sentiment of it. Regardless of the circumstances we should always endeavor to enjoy the day that is given!
BTW...that's a great picture!


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a meaningful Acrostic you;ve penned here mizz ... chocolate
the first line excelently sums up the theme, a rather multidimensional and hard subject to wite on, and in such brevity
Aj~

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omg so short but told alot thats nice
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Oh, the picture and writing coincide beautifully. The way you used the word life surrounding the poem...genius!


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Love it all.
the phot is great,
really beautiful.


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Very creative! I enjoyed the message as well
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I love that it has meaning and power within such few words... and the creativity it took to do so!

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very inspiring and noble poem you have here...great job..i am glad i read it...all the best...


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Nice acrostic on Life...
babby


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Touche'...great inspirational advise for the young and old. Thanks for the reminder.
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very nice poem here you did a very great excellent job with this write this was a pleasure to read


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Lovely Acrostics honey
gr8t job
-e


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Zen pen friend

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very good
nice acrostic my friend!

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