Congratulations
I asked you today
As to why
You hate me this way
You smirked a little
Tried not to laugh
Then turned away
In one little flash
I guess I'll never
Get to know
The reasons why
You hate me so
But even still
My heart beats fast
Your name still lingers
Almost all the time
So tell me this
My sweet Querido
Was it fun
To torture my soul?
When this year
Is finally over
Do you think that I
Will just give up quick?
Guess you're stupid
Maybe I'm dumb
Possibly these blond streaks
Are rubbing straight off*
But I still love
The beating and bruising
That I've endured
Through my body and heart
Querido J----
This is true
Tonight I confess
My love for you
Author notes
*Blond joke on myself, cause I have streaks...
Dedicated to J---- S------
If you can guess his name, your name will be featured in my profile and I'll love you as a AP Bro or Sis. 
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Combination of Option #1 and #4...sorta...
LITTLEWHITEPILLS
Do I get DQed for capitalizing it? :3
A contest entry
- Love Troubles....OPTIONS by Lae Fyrestorme.
450 points, ended August 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites? Sure! by xCandieKissesx.
300 points, ended August 29, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Guess you're stupid
Maybe I'm dumb
Possibly these blond streaks
Are rubbing straight off*
But I still love
The beating and bruising
That I've endured
Through my body and heart
Querido J----
This is true
Tonight I confess
My love for you
Wow! What a powerful and amazing way to conclude such a heartfelt and emotional piece. I'm breathless, really. This sorta reminds me of a situation I was in once..I fell for a guy who didn't love me back. I'm just really blown away by your compelling words. Thank you and good luck!
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Jacob Sellman
I'm amazing I know =3
I really like.
And is it true...?
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Sometimes...
I hate you, Katherine.
And yes, it him.
And yes, you'll be featured on the page.
And slightly...
It's complicated. I'll explain later.
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I like it. It has a lot of lines, but it all flows together. It really doesn't seem long. Best of luck
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Thank you!
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this was very sad to me. I think love should be about respect and devotion not need. But the poem is nicely done thanks for sharing
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Yes
It should be, but I still like him that way. I don't really understand it myself.
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YES! NO CAPITALS! kidding...i'm not that mean i think hehe
Love the blond joke! Love the mystery boy 2 Thanks for entering
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