To rest in peace
when life does cease
We guarentee
pleased you will be
in our coffin
dozing off in
One size fits all
fat, thin, short, tall
If you try it
you will by it
In a list
A contest entry
- The Perfect Coffin For Hollywood Women! 20 poets/BIG POINTS! by imahealer.
1900 points, ended August 22, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I was hoping this ad might be a bit longer. If you had to have a spot on the TV, you never mentioned your number, where you are located, or what would make me buy yours over another custom job! Your rhyme scheme is great! I hesitate to say it is the BEST ad, but you still have time to edit. SELL ME on your special coffin! To send me at peace off ini! LOL Thank you so much for entering my contest!

Linda
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This was really funny in a sick twisted sort of way. I imagine this would be great if they had ads for coffins. This was fun to read.

