Running, walking,
that's the only way
or get on your bike
and cycle away.
Forget about England,
forget about France.
You want to go somewhere?
Then get up and dance
Til you get where you're going
but it can't be far.
Hitch your wagon
to a nearby star
And dream that you're going
where you want to go.
Then empty will fill
with fullness and flow.
You won't have gone anywhere,
just in your mind
And you'd be surprised
the richness you'll find.
A contest entry
- Running On Empty by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended August 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
Comments
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I love the lighthearted feeling I get from this. Nice work. Best of luck to you in the contest. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to enter. I hope it proved to be an enjoyable experience and challenge for you. 
♥ Touchof1der -
The simple rhyme of this reminded me of song lyrics. I don't quite see the connection to the contest theme here, but I'm not the one judging this so who cares?
I agree with the message and wish more people in life could grasp that fun doesn't necessarily involve spending a bunch of money. Best of luck in the contest!
~woof
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