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the Gift of Love

The gigt of love is a precious gift.

  It knows no age, for it lifts up.

There are no barriers of land or race.

  The value is a priceless gift.

The feel of a need is in demand.

  From a pet to love and follow you around.

To that if a bird in a cage or,

  A large bowl and a small fish.

There is the neighbor child with a strange wish.

 

Some have love for a boy or a girl next door.

  The farmer and even the guy at the grocery store.

The fella who sells appliances that you need.

  Maybe the fireman who comforts the needs.

Caring may come from a helpful nurse.

  Even a clerk who takes time from work.

The teacher who gives freely all day long.

  Some are singers who sing a song.

Maybe it is a grandchild who finally came today.

 

There is someone waiting for all of us.

  Never leave a head un-turned.

There is a need and love waiting to be found.

  Some only need a short time care.

Others have a whole life life to spend.

  There are those who are never satisfied.

Some want the road open wide.

  Love can't always, we must play by the rules.

What's wrong with the old fashion kind of love at your side.

 

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 23, 2008
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    Nice write. Liked the rhyming, and of the topic is one that everyone could relate to. Nice job.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 19, 2008

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    Ah Mac, this made me smile. We all need love and I agree it is the most precious gift one could ever have. These words are simple truth and beautiful.

    Storm


  • a dozenglassroses
    August 19, 2008
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    Great job keep writing


  • Katie Lazette
    August 19, 2008

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    There is nothing wrong with the old fashioned love. It is too bad that many people don't have it. Beautiful write mac. Keep on writing...Katie


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 19, 2008
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    WONDERFUL AND HEARTFELT!!!!!!!

    Oh this was so sweet Mac. I enjoyed reading from start to finish. You covered so many who give us love and comfor throughtout our lives. They also need our love too. You always write from your heart dear friend. Don't ever change. Stay as sweet as you are. Hugs and Smiles.

    Blessings to you and yours,
    Sandy

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