Velvet air like felt
spectrums in the faded
summer sun; like jaded
moons asphyxiated under the
tides of endless oceans salted
with true love.
Heartstrings pulled in
perfect motions- each sound
crystalline like roses in
satin gardens scents lifted
from roots with vanilla spice...
Each embrace like cotton fields
picked ripe with flowered kisses;
pull me under your gentle swoon
and engrave me with devotion.
Diamonds shine in midnight skies
but fade behind the radiance of
each silken stare between us;
fireworks pervade the night!
A contest entry
- Love - Who can show me what they've got?? by starblaze.
600 points, ended August 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopeless Romantics by N.W. Clerk.
1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for entering the contest very nice write, appeals to all the senses very well, great imagery too.
and well done for entering a new poem, the contest was ended very early after being bombarded with pre-writes!
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wow! You are so brilliant at poetry! It is so not fair!
Let's see... like jaded moons asphyxiated under the tides of endless oceans salted with love..."
really good imagery and wording! this is great, Carly!
lolz! =D
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