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Stubborn Gas Money






Cars rumble on the
dirt roads pass by
ignored elegance with no
return; regrets piled up
in gas chambers to
keep the motor running.

Weld the doors shut
to block pain from
leaking through, but the
windows are rolled down for
the sake of fresh air...

Roll the mobile under water
and sink with stubborn gas money.









A contest entry

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    You have a very interesting and unique writing style which I admire. Best of luck to you in the contest. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to enter. I hope it proved to be an enjoyable experience and challenge for you.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 24, 2008
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    very well written thanks for entering and good luck xx


  • K-9
    August 21, 2008

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    Wow. I'm impressed you're only 15 and write this well. Some of the lines were a little too obscure for my taste, but overall this was awesome! I liked the way you broke the lines. Your method usually creates a more fast paced enjambment, but this somehow still had a laid back feel. Good stuff!
    ~woof