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Broken Eyes





Empty tunes hang to wither
in thin air; like lonely
songs trace patterns in stardust
where heartache often lingers.

Tears gather in the crevice of
broken eyes like glass against
the chalky smells you can't ignore;
putrid in their presence

deathly in their absence...



















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Was that just the wind whistling 'Dixie' or horrid gas wafting under this nose?

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 6, 2008

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    Deathly in their absence... wonderful... great write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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