i have nothing
Nothing to call my own
No place to go for comfort
No one who keeps me happy.
If im cold no one will warm me
If sad no one will please me
If hurt no one will mend me
Just alone
Hopelessly alone
All i have is my little red and green books
My red composition book with pink designs.
My green composition book with dark green poka dots.
What these books hold
Songs and poems that express my thoughts
And they will keep this occupation
Until someone comes along
And becomes my own little composition book.
Since my family will never heal me
My books will
And when they dont do the trick
You will AP.com
Until im rescued.
Author notes
thank you ap.com for letting me express myself to all!
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wow... this is amazing.. incerdibly well done.. really great
thanks for entering my contest!
and best of luck to you!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
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Very true, sometimes all we feel we have is our paper & pen, it is always there when no one else is. Great write, thank you for entering. Good luck.
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whisper
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I think until we go through loneliness we really have no comparison for it in life. A good piece, I feel ya.
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great
i love ap too
"Songs and poems that express my thoughts
And they will keep this occupation
Until someone comes along
And becomes my own little composition book." i dont know why i like this part, but its my favorite
i really understand how you feel because...i depend on ap and writing to keep me happy, pleased...and all the other stuff -
I really like this...it's so true, for a lot of us, AP is our outlet. I know it's mine...a lot of things I don't feel I can talk to people about...but here, I can say what I want and people will actually CARE.
I think we all pray for our own composition books
Great job, good luck in the contest!
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