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Its Not The Rain

Tears fall like the rain
yet nothing is seen
clouds cover the sun
like your sins do to my heart

I like rainy days
slow and silent
except for the sound of rain
hitting the windows

Warm wet cheeks
dry up like the rain
in the sun
yet nothing is forgotten

Memories shade life's journey
leading us to days of worry
as the fallen leaf scatter in the streets
how we all remember it all

Its not the rain
just my tears
loving you
once again...

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    August 26, 2008
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    The word rain is a bit over-used here. I do like the general theme. Thank you for this.