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Shelby the Cat Is Dying

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Today her breathing got bad
She ended up at the Vet
20 ounces of fluid
pressing on her little heart

She has been at the Vet
all day long
But soon she will be
coming home

Only a couple weeks
longer she has to live
So our good byes
we have to give

Shelby is a very loving cat
has been for 13 years
She will be missed
when her day does finally come

Why oh why does this have to happen
so soon after Hobbes passed away
I will never know
But Shelby you are loved until death
my baby girl

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We found out today our 13 year old cat only has a couple weeks to live.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Gosh......what a tender soul you have.......God shall not disappoint you......all of your cats are headedto heaven......missing them is going to be the hardest part......be patient....you WILL see Shelby again

     

    God bless you & Shelby,

     

    Bear ~


  • Beating gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is a very sweet poem. It's always hard to write about something like that, and I relate a lot. I lost my rabbit a few months ago - Its cage was knocked over by a storm and it left a hole in the net, so it ran away, as it must have been very frightened. And the real world isn't a place for a small rabbit, so I'm sure it died.

    Anyway, your piece was very sad, but still well written. Good job and good luck!


  • bananasfoster42
    August 20, 2008
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    aww i'm so sorry! it sucks when pets die, i know if my gooobs died i'd be a bawling mess!


  • StarEyes
    August 19, 2008

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    How sad for you! Treasure each moment that you have left! They will help you in the end...

    I am sorry this is happening to you!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • aboomer silver member
    August 19, 2008

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    awww - that is so sad ! such a beautiful cat!! Give her all the love and cuddling you can - it will make her feel better, and you too. it's so heart-breaking when we lose our pets - but if we gave them a happy life, then that what counts. And you'll always treasure her memories and the cute things she did.
    ssssssss


  • Darkwell
    August 19, 2008

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    im so sorry it sux that this is happening and i know how much it hurts she had a good life with people who love her alot and maybe its not how long we live but how well and how loved we are that counts more an someday i believe we get reunited with our pets.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    oh no

    this is so sad, to go through this again is a tragedy, but again as we know she will be missed, just keep on giving all you can till the end, thank you for sharing
    Linda

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