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Lipstick And Cocaine

Lipstick smeared on the mirror,
Traces of cocaine on the floor,
Everyday life of the drugged up hoar.
Her pimp sends her out to earn her next score.

She works through the night sleeping with men,
Taking big risks, she does it again and again.
It's a vicious circle she cannot escape,

Her pimp is violent he puts her in her place.

 

If she's lucky the vice squad will save her,

Put her in jail to change her behaviour.

Back at home she snorts more coke,

Burning holes in her nostrils,it's no joke!

 

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  • XpushXmeXagainX
    October 6, 2008

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    This is deep.
    You can almost feel the burn.
    The sting of a hand across your face.
    Maybe that's just me.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Nice write.


  • Lexie
    August 19, 2008
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    wow, this is a very unique and incredibley good poem. great flow to it and details.

    She works through the night sleeping with men,
    Taking big risks, she does it again and again.
    It's a vicious circle she cannot escape,

    Her pimp is violent he puts her in her place.


    very dramatic, grreat poem!