You feed me grapes you feed me wine
I put my heart upon the line,
I do your bidding as you will
and deep inside I feel a thrill.
You take me dancing to the edge
away from you I cannot hedge,
I place myself into your hands
we dance away to mystic lands.
You love me with a passion rare
that sends my mind into despair,
my eyes are closed so hynotized
and all my feelings are disguised.
You come and go into my life
I play the lover then the wife,
I do not care what depths to go
because I do adore you so.
A contest entry
- Love & Romance by onesugar.
1200 points, ended September 2, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This tells a beautiful story
This part really struck me
You take me dancing to the edge
away from you I cannot hedge,
I place myself into your hands
we dance away to mystic lands.
This was a pleausure
Good luck and thank you for entering
~sugar~
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cute and well written! nice poem indeed.
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Nice
simply perfect in the rhyme with a tale to tell. I do guess there are some women like that though I have never been fortunate to meet one. But again poetry so fine.
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It is truly, as simple as this. Delightful rhyme and perfect meter. This made me smile. ~Bramble
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