leaves rustle on trees
hoping they won't have to fall
too far to the ground.
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Awh, I know this shouldn't be but I kinda found this funny....
I have no idea why
So sorry :/
I likes though
Shelly
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Really nice imagery in this. Seems kind of like a metaphor for death. I don't know if you intended it that way, but a leaf on a tree in the autumn is just hanging on, waiting to fall from the life-giving stem, spiral to the earth, and die. All of us are waiting for death in a sense, and we fear it.
Don't know if you were going that deep or just writing a simple nature poem, but it's a cool write.
One of the better nature poems I've recieved so far in this contest. Thanks for entering. -
this is cute.
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leaves rustle on trees
hoping they won't have to fall
too far to the ground.
Very nice snapshot look at the wind through the trees, and your reflection. Thank you for such a thoughtful haiku.
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i like very good!!
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I love the imagery but in my mind the leaves have face and I don't know whyyy
stupid brain.
anyways, nice poem & good luck !
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Oooh, I really loved this, dear =) You write haikus too? haha
Beaut-ee-ful poem. Good luck in that contest, yo. ♥
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thankss
haha occasionally
theyre short; easy to write
and im usually able to think of something profound to say within them
♥
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This one made me chuckle.
I like how you give the leaf human qualities. -
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haha i enjoyed this one also
it's quite common for people to think like this soo i decided to write about it
thanks for the comment!
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