contemplating life
I begin to wonder if
living is worth it.
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It's worth it 
Just try stepping out into the world somewhere and living just in that very moment. Lovely ku, very contemplative.
Really makes one think, especially with all the destruction in the world.
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it is yet it isn't... contemplating write
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Yes, living is most definitely worth it.
You're gonna get somewhere HUGE with your talents
ILY
Shelly
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Well. This is quite a piece of self-expression. I think lots of people have felt this way, and lots more people have written poems about it. I like the way this poem cuts through the bullshit and simply tells it like it is, not going on and on in in emotional rambling. Not that cathartic writing doesn't have its place, but sometimes simple is better.
I hope you are feeling a bit better tonight.
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contemplating life
I begin to wonder if
living is worth it.
A contemplative haiku, which leaves the reader to ponder the question at the end. Thank you so much for your haiku.
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that reminds me of my favorite thing to say when poeple ask this...
hows life?
contemplating comiting suicide
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I think using 'life' and 'living' in one three line poem is overkill
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really i kinda like it..dno why haha
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Too short
Short and simple. Conveying a common thought in common language.
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