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Jumping Rope

she jumps rope
waiting for the bus
an anthill is trampled

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  • etoile
    August 26, 2008

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    this was an interesting take on the prompt.
    i wouldve prefered something slightly longer, after all you had 50 words to use.
    it made me smile though,

    thanks a lot for entering and goodluck