come lull me to sleep
peek-a-boo moon through gray clouds
night light's glow, full sphere
chasing indigo
dreams, where silver stars twinkle
your rise breaks silence
with held sigh explodes
mercy sprinkles on our heads
a lunar smile winks
Author notes
this is addictive!
poetryality # 3 - the last one...for real!
A Trio of Traditional Japanese haiku 5/7/5
In a list
A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely images of the moon!
I really enjoy reading poems about the moon. Such a great inspiration. Yours made me smile
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Dear Renee,
I love poems about the moon!
Although I love all three, the first one in this group is especially appealing!
Best of Luck in this contest!
Love,
Maureen
P.S.: Love the image of the moon in the background, too!
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Dear Renee;
mysterious moon
so beautiful yet so cold
silver symmetry
I think I became a lunatic before I was born. Maybe my mother used to stand on the balcony in the moonlight (wearing her nightie of course!) and listen to Chopin's nocturnes.
I love your trio of haiku. Good luck in the contest but how are the judges to number them if you don't?
Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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Oh my...what beautiful poetry...It is like music to my ears...thank you, Darlene
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Beautiful poem I enjoyed this piece great job!
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Well written set of haikus, sis. I'm sure these won't be the last though.
Love "chasing indigo dreams..." Write on. One.
Dez
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Go ahead girl. There is trully no limit to your poetic expression and talent. It is always refreshing to read you.
One Love,
John
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