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August Storm

ducklings hide
beneath a wooden bridge
perfume of decay

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I don't have any problems saying this in one breath, but that might just be all of the yoga I do.... or used to anyway Please let me know if you think it's too much.

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  • Sandal
    August 20, 2008

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    The last line is ominous, and gives one to think about the origin of the smell. The unremitting heat of late summer corrupts; it is hard to keep fruit (or anything) fresh.
    I like the image of ducklings sheltering under the bridge.