The blindness, a grace bestowed by God,
as a fury sanctimony elance,
senses link in balanced intuition,
as an object of vain painture,
concert spirits in a flames of heaven,
to liven a voice eternal in lack of lights,
reverting vision to heart's sweetness,
to echo hymns of life's sphere.
Author notes
Prompt: Blind
50 Words
Elance: a quick darting movement.( According Dictionary.com )
Painture: The art of painting ( According Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary )
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - 15 entries! prompt. by etoile.
300 points, ended August 26, 2008, 8 entries
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i wouldve prefered less wordiness, but i did understand the poem and i liked it, it was a good take on the prompt.
to liven a voice eternal in lack of lights
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i really like the alliteration in that line. it also summed up the prompt nicely.
thanks a lot for entering and goodluck
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