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Forgive Me

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If I could only erase your pain

for all the things I've said

I didn't mean to upset your life

I wish it was mine instead

 

If only I could mend your heart

and make things all anew

I would do whatever necessary

to erase the hurt from you

 

I really didn't think you cared

or thought so much of me

It seems that I was just a friend

of a mind that ran so free

 

I'm sorry for the hurt I caused

and for your broken heart

If you could just forgive me

and allow me another start

 

 

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    Congratulations on the well-deserved Bronze award---Well Done

  • piccola silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    great rhyme and excellant flow. The feelings expressed fit exactly also with the border and graphic you chose. thank you for the entry.


  • arafura gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Excellent! You expressed it so very well.