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Supernal



Where zephyr is satiny and sun moire,
while sailing across the horizon,
silver flakes, a fleeting glory;
reinventing an azure sapphire charm as dreamy
promises of grandeur, mystical aurora.





























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Prompt: Sky
29 Words

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  • etoile
    August 22, 2008

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    'reinventing an azure sapphire charm as dreamy'
    that lines had a lot of imagery; and it was definitely my favourite line in this piece
    for a short poem you did wonderfully with the prompt

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • aanika
    August 19, 2008

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    reinventing an azure sapphire charm as dreamy

    LOVE the imagery.
    good luck!
    nice take on the prompt.