Some days
I just want
to strip you
of all
connectives,
associations,
wasted adulation
and those
who’ll never
understand.
Sometimes
I need your
smile,
the sound of
your mornings,
forgotten endearments
that always
distance us
away from
you.
Some nights
I crave
more than
an illusion,
dreams that
fiddle about
my cobweb
head, the
blank pillow
and too
hollow bed.
Some days
I need
the knowing
of where
you are
not the
who I
want of
you.
Author notes
Just how I was feeling a few days ago
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I really liked this. I thought that it was very well written and flowed very well. Thank you for sharing and best of luck for the future. Keep writing. xoxo
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I really like this. There's a depth of feeling to it and your words really carry the message so well. Great job.
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Lovely, quite sad though. The longing of that certain someone is evident. Good Job!
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Full of echoing sadness "the blank pillow
and too hollow bed." Great emotion!
Poesy
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I like the vocabulary and rhythm to this piece.
Nicely written
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Some nights
I crave
more than
an illusion,
oh, I know how that feels.
I can relate
and I love how you worded this piece,
brilliance.
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my cobweb head,very discriptive, i like the mood of this poem
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Superb
A very fine mood piece, indeed. I liked the imagery which you created; as I felt, I could relate to your mood. Thanks for sharing this one.
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Nicely done.
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This piece pretty much sums up how I feel right now. This was very well written and put together with a beautiful flow. Amazing write. Definitely worth the read.
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I Understand!
Well put! Sometimes we have feelings like this for sure! tHANK GOODNESS IT'S NOT AN EVERYDAY THING!
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*sigh* blank pillow, hollow bed, nights with illusions and dreams playing in your head... it sounds to me like your lover is away from home. Mine too.
Some days are harder than others. This was written really beautifully. Its straight-forward but still full of illistrations. -
Reminds me of Meat Loaf
Some nights it don't come easy, Some nights it don't come hard
A real breath taker
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