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Amelia Crucified

Kafka is in Jerusalem
with his rainbow boots
tuned to channel one,

as always, there is coffee
a paper to unfold.

          shadows tint changes in her face.

now bursts over and over


every morning he wakes
amid the rented bric-a-brac
to write the wrong poem--
wild leaves
snow in Georgia September;

fat words swimming in grease
lean chastisements to bury a face
even the score.

just a wrinkle 0f                words
a hurt in the numbness
                Madame Sesotris
turning the card
that shows him kneeling before her

wounds. At night he crept back
to dripping blood,
sand and water

measuring, always measuring





Author notes

"The almost invisible blight
of the present bursts in on us"


"Attabled with the Spinning Years"
by John Ashbery

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 1, 2008
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    Nice job. Very interesting poem.


  • PerfectTonight
    September 1, 2008

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    Another great piece...you never ceaseto amaze me. I run out of words1!!! Thank you for sharing....


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    Wish I could see things in the present but I look back and look forward trying to work out if the present has a purpose at all. I may get my Tarot cards out and try them, better than political satire that the papers spew each morning, I wonder if they think about wrong poems each morning and do they kneel? One would think not for that would require humility. C


  • Frank N Beevers
    August 19, 2008

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    too right

    Now IS bursting over and over and the words will never adequately chronicle the passage.

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