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The Force is with you. . .

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Feel it.
Sense its power.
Use it!

The force is undisturbed
Till you awaken it.
but
Once felt...

It's like a secret treasure
It will never die.
but
Grows stronger each day.

So seek it out.
Learn to use it's Magic
And the Force...
Will never leave you.

dragonheart1

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Picture credit: http://www.the-planets.com/star-biography/yoda_biography_3.jpg

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  • Mallig gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    Lovely! There is much Yoda widom in this. Yes the force is in us, ready to be tapped... however we define it. Thank you for this entry!


  • Frozentearz
    August 22, 2008
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    aww I liked this it was fun to read and reaffirms that the force is always with you!!!!
    Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz


  • peridotPixi
    August 20, 2008
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    how cute, yoda poetry who would have thought? appentley someone did, and you thought about it too, i like how you can feel the magic of the force in this poem, keep up the writing, ~Amy


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Dam that guy down there stole what I was gonna say XD
    "the force is strong in you young Skywalker"

    I love yoda ^^
    Have you heard the weird al song Yoda? It's a parody of lola by the kinks , but about yoda Very good read ^^


    Very nicely written as usual
    May the force be with you



    Claire (noir) x


  • Griswold silver member
    August 19, 2008
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    Geat write for this contest, a well done entry indeed. the force is strong in you young Skywalker. Best of luck....Scott

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