Asked—I was
Done it—I have
Looking—I was
Find it—I did…
Reflecting, I was…
‘The force’, strengthened by it…
A bitter pill, to swallow—indeed
Thanks I did give, Kindness was
The answer…
“Forgive him…”—the advice
Came…
Found at last: freedom; arrived
IT DID…
Author notes
I loved Yoda...but never tried to talk like him...hahaha! First time for everything, huh? lol...
A contest entry
- Yoda Poetry by Mallig.
1050 points, ended September 7, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yoda-rific! I enjoyed the wisdom of this, sometime forgiveness and kindness are very difficult indeed, but necessary for finding peace. Thanks for this entry!
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I think this is about forgivness and the powerful force it is or can be in our lives if we do it from the heart and not for social convention.
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That's good...I think so too. It's for a contest. Had to be witty (I actually missed that part here I think), short and in "Yoda-Speak"...and still try to be 'meaningful'. Hope it 'cuts the mustard'...lol. Thank you very much for the visit (it's always so good to see you).
AsIThink...
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Wonderful, this is!
Great this is! Love this, I do! Hard work for you this must have been! Lots and lots of applause you do deserve!
Well done, you have.. A Jedi you will one day be!
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"Well done, you have.. A Jedi you will one day be!" - Thank you so much for this hilarious comment. It was toooo funny. So tell again, why aren't you in this contest? lol. Lovely comments Lotus. Made me smile again. If you enter, I think I'll withdrawl...hahaha.
AsIThink...
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well done
sooo creative I do love the way your mind work
may the force be with you my friend...
good luck in the contest
God bless...
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Hello there Pisces...so good to know the affect this had on you. You have quite a talent for great comments. Loved this wonderful feedback. Thank you very much.
AsIThink...
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Nicely done for this contest, talking like Yoda Isn't that easy, nor to make a meaningful poem while doing so. You did both. best of luck...scott
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Wow...I honestly appreciate your thoughts on this piece. I see you're in the same contest so I'll be popping in on you momentarily... "A Jedi Master, strong...he must be" (and being a Jedi just ain't me...lol). Some terrific applause here. Thanks a lot..
AsIThink...
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from what ..
..I can tell the force is strong in this one!
you've penned an excellent piece young jedi!
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"Trying, I am. A Jedi, I'm not...(yet) - hahaha. Thanks for this great feedback Swan.
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