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I am...



Honoured to be requested
to join your family.
I'd like to say you are in mine;
but here no one belongs to me.

I will admit that if I did
you would of course be in the ranks.
But as it is, and only now
I offer you sincerest thanks.

What would I be, if I indeed
was welcomed in with open arms?
I might ask for such a title,
if it appealed to all your charms...

...I would be honoured (all the more)
if you were to dub me as such:
your Silver Quill. That's all;
I'd appreciate it very much.



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TheSilverQuill



A contest entry

How Do You Like Our Soul?

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  • Luckintheshadows
    August 24, 2008

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    Ah, now this is lovely Thank you so much for writing this for my contest...*warm fuzzy feelings* bahahaha....This is great though, I love the flow of this poem.
    Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • Your Darkness
    August 19, 2008

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    I liked this poem alot! I don't know if you were looking for comments on it, but I really like the style of the poem and the words you chose more than the actual meaning, anyways... Good write. =)