Valley dawns
illuminated trees
stand on mist.
Andrew Hide
15~01~2004
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Written January 15th, 2004
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a wonderful capture i have spent some time on mountains...PK
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This is beautiful
For its a misty morn quite like here in Ky
and the mist hovering on the ground is somewhat cold to my bones
Ahhhhh could visualize this one sweetie
I only have to go to my front door and look out
Love ya sweets
Susan~~~~~~
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Andrew.Great word picture.Bill
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standing on the mist of time
in the glory of the rain beckoned forest around...
great Hiku
good form and imagery
Tamara -
Pretty ku. Discriptive, with a touch of surreality. Very pleasant reading. Only seven words too...short does it best, as ever. Great job.
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exquisite
Oh...you have captured that image perfectly. I have seen it a thousand times...and will never see it again without these words dancing through my mind. Wonderfully done. I do so love the concisely done poem...to me the epitome of the poetic art. Thanks so much for sharing this brilliant bit of poesy.
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hi andrew - enjoyed this poem very much...i quite like valley dawns as the first line...i seem to remember you having some doubts about it on another haiku board - but i like it...
love the image of the lit tree floating in fog...excellent...
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very good
Beautifully done. I had the pleasure of playing in the early morning mist one day. It produced some startling images that I turned into part of a story.
I love the memories you have brought back for me.
thanks,
John -
The background that you chose adds to the imagery... very nice
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what a perfect description, you have painted a lovely picture of the sometimes almost unreal mist and light at dawn.
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This is awesome. I can just see this. The mist lingering over the valley floor. Wow cool image.
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