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Without a trace

Without a trace I come at night
I softly come to ease your fight
Pedals of hope I bring to you
Your tearfull prayers was heard anew

I softly come to ease your fight
Bearing your much asked hope and light
Your water-planet receives grace
But no one there can see my face

Pedals of hope I bring to you
Rosing away the dark and blue
God send me down to see you through
Your tearfull prayers was heard anew

Author notes

This poem was a picture prompt:

To view click: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2416056

Message to the Judge,
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God will see you through this time Becks! I can see by the pictures you choose for the contest that you still believe.
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I see the water [in the picture] as the earth, and the pedals as the hope that God send down.

DON'T LOOSE FAITH - No prayer goes unanswered!

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  • carole21
    August 25, 2008

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    nicely written . . flows well . liked "Without a trace I come at night" and "Bearing your much asked hope and light" . . congrats on the trophy


  • myrataal silver member
    August 25, 2008
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    What a beautiful poem of golden sentiments ...

    I am glad you are here for Rebekah

    Love
    Myra


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    August 19, 2008

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    This brought tears to my eyes! How did you know?

    I loved this poem and the ray of hope that this poem bear with it!

    Thank you for entering my contest! All the best!

    Becks