She is so hard to see, so invisible to me
i close my eyes to see Her walking through the darkness
while She slips away into eternity
far from the ever shrinking outreach of my caress
longing for haunted dreams of You
the soothing stars no longer console
and the Moon can no longer woo
my listless existance, opaque and dull
so i resign to perpetual obscurity
to let my archaic illusion incandesce
fading away my reverie
that demential wounds may coalesce
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I love the begining.
Everyone is hard to see if you dont know who they really are.
So many people hide behind a mask.
So everyone is invisible.
Does that mean we are not really here?
That existance is a lie?
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I often wonder (and wish it so) myself.
Mayhaps this is all but a dream, and eventually I, or whoever is dreaming, will wake and this world will cease to be.
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Well I'm bad with words...
but I think I know what you mean...and to be honest this is a poem every girl wishes someone would write about her. Your style has changed a bit from the other Xeroabyss account that you had. I'm not at all dissappointed because even thought I love your dark side this side is terrific for the soul as well! You've always been one of my fave authors and I will always respect, cheerish and honor our relationship!!! Your the coolest online person ever and always surprizing me!!! Lucky girl lol...I hope that you get over this heartbreaks!!! hope that last rose thing works You deserve it
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Ha!
No one wants to hear this from me though
But yeah, no worries, contrary to what some others might think, i've buried away such obsessive feelings and shortly enough they will suffocate and die for all time -
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don't lie *smacks you* lying is bad. I think every girl would. Ur always downing urself but ur super kewl and I should know because I'm not...wait I'm no hypocrit!!! Let me rephrase that...Ur the super hero I'm the sidekick...U eat ret meat and I eat leafy lettuce
*bunny ears* hee hee! Don't kill those feelings...I'll draw an unhappy face on me if you do 
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this is all around a great work of art. You have a really great style. It flows very nicley off the tongue. I like to read your poems out loud.
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amazing poet you are! a beautiful depression. like the title too
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what a dream reality is
and reality's a nightmare...
i hope you can find peace somewhere...
its hard to believe but remember, i still love the shit outta you!
love elfie
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A dream fading, leaving only the faint whisper of what might have been, of what may never be...
An ending to the Goddess of Sorrow, perhaps in this ending a new beginning can be found.
Loved all three, even in the pain, I found beauty...
~E.
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Beautiful, once again you have stolen my breath away... (Hey give it back I'm chocking... lol. Seriusly though) Touching piece.
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Dangerous AND funny,nice!
And thanks.
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woooow
very effective and sad! well written and so much feelings was put in such piece..well done my friend
welcome to AP
juliet
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