The force and all its wisdom
are all around you but sometimes
this even Yoda cannot see.
Don't think feel the force
around you the answer
will then clear become.
Difficult to see always
in motion the force
this even Yoda cannot see.
Much to learn you still
have you must feel the
force around you.
Masking the future
is a disturbance
of the force.
Disturbing this question
is meditate on this I will.
Don't think feel the force
the answer you seek will
be found there.
You will know when you
are calm and at peace
Author notes
Yoda- speak
please credit http://www.the-planets.com/star-biography/yoda_biography_3.jpg
- The freedom to promote your poems and group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Yoda Poetry by Mallig.
1050 points, ended September 7, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - (contest #198) Catching Up with my friends by daviscth.
400 points, ended February 10, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really enjoyed this and the picture is great. I think this is the first Star Warms poem I've read on here. You did a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing with me.
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so i stopped reading at around the second verse. the word placement is very disoriented. it made me not interested.
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Great yoda-speak and philosophy too! Thanks for this entry!
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well done, my favorite line is
Don't think feel the force
very profound truth my friend
awesome write
God bless...
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excellent
Wonderful creation, so very well done. Best of luck in the contest -
Yoda....you speak of Yoda. A Star Wars piece, this is. With words, painted a picture, you have. I sense, a great poet, you are.
Good write.
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Oh, I see; this is a contest entry. It makes more sense now that I know this is Yoda-speak. At first it was awkward, but I get it now. Very nicely done.
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hahahaha This poem is so funny! >.< Very good "Yoda-speak".
"Much to learn you still
have you must feel the
force around you."
This was the most Yoda-ish line to me. haha Great job here. Good luck in the contest. :]
-Lily♥
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Awesome poem I loved the star trek theme great job!
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"Disturbing this question
is meditate on this I will." - I loved these lines most... An excellent write, this is! lol... Great flow and a good story. I really enjoyed this piece.
Two thumbs up; good luck in this contest.
AsIThink...
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WIN THE GOLD TROPHY YOU MAY DO.
You will know when you
are calm and at peace
You have a crush on that cute and mystical green dude, Baby - I believe that this is so. Yoda cannot see all - this may be true - but I believe that he can see you - and he has on you a quite a crush, too BUT even a dude as wise as he may be and truly is has a hard time speaking his heart and mind sometimes. If it is a shiny Gold Trophy that you seek with this piece, dear one - come to pass it could be.
Peace & Love!
Earl
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great descriptive piece. Best of luck in the contest.
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so true and correct, wise poem penned
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Nicely done for this contest, the longer they are the harder..lol Nicely done, best of luck...Scott
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You have created a wonderful poem
Yoda does speak and the thoughts he portrays are so true and heartfelt
Love this one hun
Best wishes
Julie
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