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Running Away

Filled with fear
Don't wanna be here
Can't stand this place
Memories I need to erase
Gotta disappear
Get away from here
Run as far as I can
I don't need a plan

Forget my face
And all you knew
Forget my past
My time is through

Make a new start
Lose the pain in my heart
I'll forget all I knew
That's all I can do
Pretend not to care
I won't take it there
Wash it all away
and start a new day

Forget about me
You won't notice I'm gone
I'm fixing my past
And righting my wrongs

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Just a quick write.. had to let it out

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  • RawrItsKrista
    December 11, 2008
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    Wow! This is awesome.
    And the last stanza is powerful.
    I love it.
    Great job!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 21, 2008
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    quick but the impact is still strong and feel through your words my friend, keep it flowing


  • arezes mom
    August 19, 2008

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    nice!!! i like how ur feelings just like POP out at u. I feel like this is such an inspirational type poem for me..."Fixing my past and righting my wrongs"... u my fine friend have TALENT!!!!


    Lissa