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Beautiful Sky(Hay(na)ku)

Clouded
In daytime
Twinkling at night

In a list

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    August 22, 2008

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    this is a bit too short for my liking, but good take on the prompt; more on the descriptive side though because i was looking for more imagery
    but i like the last line
    it was pretty

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 20, 2008
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    Great haiku! Good luck in the contest!


  • aanika
    August 19, 2008

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    ... this was more a description of the sky lol.
    I don't really care for short poetry,
    I feel like you could have done so much more with this.
    good luck though