pray to god every-night before i
sleep for someone to adopt me
from this place.
i pray for every-one
to noticed the world
crying out for help
angel wish is simple and
easy and not every hard to
remember, but easy to forget
us.
the angel of mine and
the heart of soul and the
wonder of a child mind.
god answered my pray-er and
enter my life and saved me
when i needed him the most
i home to heaven and
shard-ed a smile with my
farther. but still every night
i pray for safety of other
people that has and is going
through what i want through.
Author notes
this poem reads out about childerens in the adoption
and looking for homes and some kids never make it out
the homes and.the only way is death for them
(CHAOS)
A contest entry
- Lost Love or Friendship by piccola.
450 points, ended August 21, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - This time I'm going to WIN!!! by darlintlc.
900 points, ended August 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
a child that past and still thinking of other
Comments
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I believe God will answer your prayers for all the children out there who needs someone to care.
Thanks for entering
darlintlc
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this is sad and sweet but not really what I was looking for. I wanted the loss of long friendship or romantic love. thank you for entering
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To think that their are women who can't have children of their own and would love to adopt. This is bittersweet because of the sweet thoughts of the dead child. But then it's sad, too. The only problem I saw with your poem is some spelling mistakes, other than that, I think it is a brilliant effort.
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