My poem this is, in verse I will write,
My bold young apprentice, pretend Jedi Knight.
To be a poet Vader wants, his quest is AP.,
He is strong with the dark side, black poetry.
Stop him we must, seduced he has been,
His membership cancelled, to this I have seen.
The verse is strong with this one, sad though it be.
To come back he will try, this I can see.
Once you start down the dark path, your mind will it keep,
To forget we must make him, then forever sleep..
A contest entry
- Yoda Poetry by Mallig.
1050 points, ended September 7, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute, this is. Easy seems to come your flow. Practice much, me thinks you have. LOL Well, I tried. Good luck.
Dez
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Excellent this is, very clever and funny. Thanks for this entry!
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This was very funny. I like your take on the prompt. My fav lines are: "The verse is strong with this one, sad though it be. To come back he will try, this I can see." I like the direction and rhyme in it...good job and best of luck in the contest.
AsIThink...
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Omg! This is so funny!
Really Great Poem! Let us see...
favorite part of mine is...
"To be a Poet Vader wants, his quest is AP.,
He is strong with the dark side, black poetry.
Stop him we must, seduced he has been,
His membership cancelled, to this I have seen."
Keep Up the good work, I think it is worth A bronze.
Tehzeeb
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Brilliant take on the contest. Excellent rhythm as I read, and good rhyming.
Good luck!
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hahaha lol thats hell awesome!!! black poetry...lol great write and good luck in the contest
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This is awesome
Great job in yoda-poem 
And funny too. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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