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Nape of Passion ( HM )

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Midnight blue velvet,

back drop bistro,

table set for two.

 

Scarlet lady,

figurine elegance waltzed,

steps so light ..

   floating.

 

Vintage claret,

matured room temperature,

rising heat

   of passion.

 

Fruits of wine,

fed by hand,

lips touched softness

  caressing...

 

bitten desires,

illuminating gloss,

  stroking...

 

Swan nape begging,

sensual touch,

hands of her lover,

gliding against her silks.


Scents of ...

Poison

perfume air breathes,

captivating-  spirits lifting.

 

Vines holding hearts,

sung memories,

finer the tune..

 

of our " holiday romance "

  me and you..

 

 

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  • onesugar gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    This was a beautiful read and transported me back to wonderful holiday romance I had some years ago.

    A pleasure to read
    Good luck and thank you for entering

    ~sugar~


  • Age of Rain
    August 21, 2008

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    Vampiric much?

    'scents of...
    poision'

    What a lovely way to capture the emotion and feeling that the woman must be going through.

    You started with dynamic imagery and ended it perfectly. Beautiful!


  • apropos
    August 21, 2008
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    very sweet and romantic. well done!


  • Swtpoetryman
    August 19, 2008

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!

    Vines holding hearts,
    sung memories,
    finer the tune..

    of our " holiday romance "
    me and you..

    I'm sure that Sugar will TRULY ENJOY this fine piece, Julie - as she has spoken of a HOLIDAY ROMANCE that she had some time ago that still brings a twinkle to her eye - and a warm feeling to her heart. And as she is in a romance now - and feeling head over heels and like a teenager again - this romantic dinner will hit the spot - to say the least! Good Luck in this contest with this piece and - as always - I Thank You 'SO MUCH' for sharing it with me.
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.

  • imahealer
    August 19, 2008

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    Whoot!Whoot! LOVED THIS ENTIRELY! How romantic to be fed "the fruit of the vine" one by one, slowly savoring the intention! Holiday romances, the best kind, if you're already hooked. A trip of divine bliss, never to be forgotten, only remembered for the ultimate in romance, which you have deftly created in this sensual verse. LOts of imagery and perfect line breaks. Metaphors, there! What else would a judge want, but to hand the gold to you!
    Love, sis XOXO


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    So lovely this is

    You have penned a beautiful piece here and I loved the read thankyou


  • daviscth silver member
    August 19, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the prompt sissy. I had no ideal what to do with this one, yet you had no trouble at all. Good luck in the contest.


  • Angelflower
    August 19, 2008

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!! you did such a wonderful job!!! I'm just in aww! I really love where you went with this hun.. it's so soft an djust romantic!!! Loved it!! best of luck in the contest!!


    Angel


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Wow, fantastic! The imagery is gorgeous, I must visit that bistro You've even made the claret sound delish! Beautifully penned hunni, good luck in your contest


  • Topaze
    August 19, 2008
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    A lovely piece very well written, my best wishes always.

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