The look in your eyes reveals your deepest desires.
Your thoughts are so deceptively innocent.
I can see words like forever and fate,
Lining your irises.
You take my hand in your's.
Such a genuine sign of affection.
Gently stroking circles with your thumb.
The friction sending a natural impulse to kiss you.
You sigh as I release my lips from your's,
But I'm thinking about taking them as a prisoner.
With no chance of bail,
Because I want to kiss you for eternity.
As we settle into our shared bed,
You pull the covers over us.
In such darkness my nerve endings,
Are heightened to every atom of your being.
You find your way to my lips,
In the shield of the darkness.
Sending an electrical shock through me,
Powerful enough to light this room.
Baby, you should know better,
Than to kiss me so haphazardly.
Another touch to my lips,
May cause this city to blackout.
Because you're just that amazing.
A contest entry
- Light Hearted by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Awww this was just so sweet!!! and beautifully crafted in imagery.. Bravo! you really moved this girls heart with this write..Lol. What a peaceful and loving write.. thank you very much for sharing something really beautiful..Good luck in the contest.
Angel
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wow. that just gave me the chills--that is SOOO good. awesome work. omg.
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