drowning. I. Can't. Breath.
your
e
y
e
s draw me in
to a world where one mistake
{is} all it {takes}
to fall apart, and lose [Mine} your heart.
Your eyes ArE
D
E
P
T
H
L
E
S
S
They cloud my mind
now your all I think about
All the time...
Are YoU haPpy Now, You've !Made!
Me
See
The { DArknEss} that is
.......Surronding........
[you]@nd[Me]
Author notes
Keep it in mind that this is a working progress........
A contest entry
- Another Dirty-Pretty Contest. ♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
475 points, ended September 6, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this i like how you spelled depthless sideways it gave a different feel to the poem...i've never seen that before
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thanks..... hehe,
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i cant believe you only started writing dirty pretty like... yesterday! you is so good
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very well written poem.... a mixture of feelings are definitely noticeable. confusion, hatred, sadness, love...
keep up the great work
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