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The Fire That Burns Within

There's a fire that burns within me
Your touch brings forth the flame
Babe, you ignite my passion
When I hear you whisper my name
Oh … how my body shivers
But babe it’s not cause’ I’m cold
It’s from the sweetest anticipation
Of a desire that never grows old

I lay my head upon your chest
Kissing tenderly your skin
Like wine your scent intoxicates me
As I luxuriously drink it in
The way your hands caress me
Make me feel like a giddy little girl
The way you make my body melt
Sends all of my senses in a whirl

You lift me gently and kiss my forehead
Sending shivers down my spine
Babe we’re caught between love and lust
We’re walking a very fine line
I can feel the moisture growing
As soft, tender kisses caress our lips
The excitement in my body builds
When your hands slide over my hips

Feathered breath caresses silken skin
I love it when you do the things you do
Every nerve in my body is tingling
With an explicit need for you
Babe, I’m hungry for your touch
As you shower my body with pleasure
A sigh and a moan escapes my lips
As your fingers glide over my treasure

Slipping into me, you’re the only key
That knows how to turn me on
Sparks fly between us igniting passion
There won’t be any objection
Heaven is here in your arms tonight
Forever bound by the intimacy we share
And I see that intensity in your eyes
Babe, only you take me there


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  • Sprite silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Very sensual. Congrats on the bronze. ~ Joyce

    • Bel Ange silver member
      August 25, 2008
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      Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem

      Jan ♥


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Love and sensuality flow through your words and at times literally jumped off the page at me.

    Your rhyming was so natural to me and seemed to fit so well the emotions you expressed.

    Thank you for your beautiful entry and best wishes in the judging.

    Love Margaret

    • Bel Ange silver member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you, I din't expect to win a place with this poem I don't usally do rhyme poems because I'm not very good at rhyming so it was a nice suprise to log in and find this

      Jan ♥

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