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My Sweet Soul, Let's Meet in the Middle (Ded: Poeticweaver)

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Three seconds to say
I love you more so today
lets enjoy loves way
With each three seconds, my heart gives you all,
overwhelming thoughts, penetrate the mind.
Hands find you, on your hips they fall,
your hearts strength, one of a kind.
Lips brought passion, to me,
eyes now closed I see,
lover's dancing
romancing
passion
us..

You and I, Meeting in the middle of love's path!

our
touching,
reminiscing,
brought tenderness
amongst hearts so true.
Entwined we kiss, with ease,
like old friends we blend perfect.
Splitting's not a option, faith, strength,
pure loves our best friend. Come closer please,
enjoy what true hearts share, two souls combined.
Three seconds to say
I love you more so today
lets enjoy loves way

Author notes

This is done with a double Haiku ( 5-7-5 syllable counts) and done with a double etheree...first one being a reversed followed by a forward etheree, creating double arrows...(just screwing around with forms lol)

This is dedicated to Poeticweaver, my SOS, my best friend, my poetic collab partner, my soul...

Timothy~

I know you have been going through some things but always know
that at the end of the tunnel their will be light...(me holding a flashlight *smile*s) j/k for there is only ONE that can bring you the total light you need my friend. I am a mere friend burning with a passion to keep your spark lit. I do love you more then you know.

Stay strong.

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    To love and support a friend in such a honorable way, it shows the true meaning of love
    Well done


  • moon2u
    October 26, 2008
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    very creative and touching
    congratulations
    hugs Moony


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 25, 2008
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    Sweet poem thats heartfelt...Lips brought to passion.... (delicious!) Superb!


  • ResplendentCloud
    October 25, 2008

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    AWWWW

    this is so beautiful, hun <33
    very strong and emotional and to dedicated to someone is lovely

    and congrats on the silver trophy


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    this is beautiful my love I simply love it you did a gold job but silver is cool luv u


  • emc2
    October 25, 2008

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    Wow! Very, very beautiful! You can tell that comes from the heart! I really love this poem. I love the way you describe everything. So sweet to dedicate it to someone close to you. Congrats on the silver trophy. Definately deserved it. Well done!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 19, 2008
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    Congrates On The Silver Victorious!


  • Swan song gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Excellent!!!!! I envy you I dont know that I could do a poem like that Well done!!!!


  • Amera gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    What a fantastic idea; using a Senryu, Etheree combination is pure genius. I’d live to steal your idea and try one.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • sunslave
    August 20, 2008
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    Cool

    very sweet great job good luck!
    Ps awesome visual effects!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Amazing,

    I want you to know, as I have read your words from your heart and soul of faith and love, you are an angel to me my sweet soul, and always will be. You try so hard to help me smile each day with your compassionate ways. I do adore this precious poem that now breathes in each heartbeat of my own. LOvely of you, and as always, thanks for the sun that shines through... Helping me to find my way. Hey, I'll take a flashlight any day, something is better than zip. Thanks for the dedication, and you're truly appreciated! I love you!

    Your forever friend.
    -Timothy aka poeticweaver, Servant of Shadows.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Brilliantly formed concrete. And a perfect dedication.
    Wonderful stuff.

    He will adore it, I do and it isn't aimed at me.


  • firefly53633
    August 19, 2008

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    Phenomenal!

    Kudos! And a thunderous bunch of applause!
    This was so extremely enjoyable and so well done!I loved how you really described the emotion! Thank you for writing such a beautiful thing! Keep the light shining on this work!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Very concrete, Tory - really hits the eye. Good luck in the contest.



    By the way, I'd say that the opening and closing were senryu, rather than haiku, but who cares.


  • gcpirelli
    August 19, 2008

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    I realy enjoyed this poem. It is well written and I liked the creative forms used. It has a good flow to it. A lovely message for a good friend. Good luck in the contest. This made me smile.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    This is beautiful. Very unique! Love the idea of meeting in the middle. Pam

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