Did you taste of love,
drink in the beauty
of a kindred soul.
Savor the flavor of
the heart of another
tasting yours.
Share the
ambrosia of true
love's reward
A kiss so sublime,
It adds blush
to the wine.
A contest entry
- All Senses Contest ( pre-writes allowed now ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended August 26, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent metaphor within this composition!
Well Done & Good Luck in the contest!
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Beautifully worded simple but you arouse the senses on the pleasures of love....You have to taste love to know its power both goodness and the sting.
You been Hood Winked...smile..Good luck in this contest.
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Hoodwinked
I like how you paint your metaphors. I would like to taste love. I havven't tasted it in a long time. best of lukck o you in the contest and in all your future writing endeavors. -
Hood-Winked!
I really love the last stanza of this poem - very well crafted and full of beautiful imagery
the rest was a delightful read too but the last stood out the most - best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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Capitalize the first of the line.
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nicely written
you seen to have the words to make your poems sound so in tune to love, thank you for this entry good luck
Linda
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