Grasping
upward feeling nothing
Desperate
to touch
Clean, crisp, chilling
Undaunted,
I reach again
Touching
the edge freeing my mind
Soaring
into the heavens
Knowing
I have been there…
Author notes
29 words
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - 15 entries! prompt inspired by etoile.
458 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Grasping
upward feeling nothing
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i really liked that
it was a good start to the poem.
great take on the prompt; thanks for entering
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I usually prefer longer lines,
but for a thirty word poem this worked well
"I reach again
Touching
the edge freeing my mind.
I love that part,
good luck.
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