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Canopies

Mind's eye
sees life's canopy
spreading over each day.

Doubt's sight always
dreading the clouds,
but hope's gaze
full of wings,
waiting for rainbows.

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24 words
prompt: sky

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  • etoile
    August 22, 2008

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    i really liked the message in the second stanza
    it really says a lot in so few words.
    'life's canopy' is also an amazing image
    great job and thanks for entering


  • aanika
    August 19, 2008

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    Mind's eye
    sees life's canopy
    spreading over each day.

    'life's canopy' ... nice take on the prompt
    good luck!


  • maralisa silver member
    August 19, 2008

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    but hope's gaze full of wings,waiting for rainbows.a great take on the promt good luck in the contest