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How?

There's so much I'd like to say,
But there won't be another day.

You have gone and left me,
I won't even get to see
The picture of your life
Folding out in front of you.

When did you start to feel this way?
Couldn't you have told me yesterday?

There's no better way to
Say life's been so blue,
Without you in my days
To pull me up again.

I wonder if you knew your great worth,
The joy you carried from your birth!

Do you know that I would give,
Anything to have you back,
How did you not realize,
That you were loved, by us all!?

Author notes

This was a poem inspired by a song- specifically written for a contest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=28FYBvuGGl8

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Comments


  • Redeemed15
    August 25, 2008

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    Hey! What do ya know? I clicked random and it brought me to this poem! Great job.

  • Redeemed15
    August 19, 2008
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    Great poem.

    You have gone and left me,
    I won't even get to see
    The picture of your life
    Folding out in front of you


    Do you know that I would give,
    Anything to have you back,
    How **you** not realize,
    That you were loved, by us all!


    Great poem, thanks for entering my contest