I look into your eyes
There's darkness all arround
Except for the blowing wind
There can't be heard a sound
I'm searching for your soul
But cannot seem to find
Passing under the moon
My eyes are going blind
Coldness engulfs my body
Fire enflames your heart
The wind has now stopped blowing
My world is torn apart
Screams are heard then silence
Darkness fills my soul
I've lost my heart and spirit
Because you let me go
A contest entry
- Lost Love or Friendship by piccola.
450 points, ended August 21, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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This is an amazing poem filled with so much emotion. You did a great job with this. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Oh, such a sad write. The lost of love, truly known by many. I love the way you wrote out the feeling. I sadly, am use to losing love or friendship. The last stanza, really gets to me, in a good way, not bad.... well it feels bad, but it's good... (if that made ANY sense) I lost my heart and soul with the passing of my grandmother. And... I lost another part of it because of my ex. Very nicely penned. Keep on writing. Luck in the contest.
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I enjoy the sadness that I feel. Well, I don't like sadness but I like the rhyme and the way it is expressed. Thank you for your entry.
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