god's eye
pearly blue, cast down deeply on a planet
etched in hues of envy and sadness, green and blue.
lifeless yet livid, this eternal expanse
nets stars across its neck, like great peals of dazzling white,
entwined across azure wings.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE - 15 entries! prompt inspired by sidereal.
458 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is a really beautiful poem.
the imagery was fantastic.
'etched in hues of envy and sandess' <-- that was a very well written line.
thanks for entering, and goodluck
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this eternal expanse
nets stars across its neck, like great peals of dazzling white,
gorgeous.
good luck!
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