Weaving tendrils
caressing frame
flowing gown
to ignite flames
behind the mask
denying fame
leave I must
before I'm shamed
never knowing
Duckarella's thy name.
Author notes
25 words, based on image prompt on contest page.
A contest entry
- It's a PIF, It's Quickie, It will be a Picture ~ 10-25-30 by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended August 18, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
Comments
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Good poem...like the ending! NIcely done.
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lol duckerella lol thanks for the smile
congrats on the hm
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That last line really had me rolling!! lol. you did such a wonderful job with this prompt though.. You went beyond the picture and created something unique! bravo!! And congrats on the HM!
Angel
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You are great at these contest, you sure have a lot of trophies, good for you.
This was a quick read for me, great inspiration from the prompt.
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thanks for the comment my dear friend, I enter the contests mainly to challenge my muse to write in different styles and from various prompts, sometimes a contest inspires me to write more than one piece and then I only enter the piece that fits the given rules etc even if it is not as good as the other.
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Cute and funny. Duckarella! lol. you deserve that HM.
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thanks for the comment, I am glad you got a laugh out of it, that was the intent.
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congrats on the shiny emerald honorable goblet
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wow last part tossed me. lol
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my dear friend you managed to place a needes smile and chuckle upon my face witrh this write -loved the line "weaving tendrils" but had to laugh at idk why :
"leave I must
before I'm shamed"
thanx hun for the smiles and many blessings always xxxx
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Uhmmmmm.....I don't remember a Duckarella in the history books
!!!! This was very fun to read...excellent job with the rhyme!!! Best wishes..
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lol, in the image it looked like a yellow beak similar to Donald and Daisy, so my thoughts ran that way. glad you see the humour in it.
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Love how you managed to rhyme this with only 25 words and pull it off so well... like the tale you told too
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I had trouble trying to get the cinderella angle out of my head when I saw the image, so just let the muse adapt the tale. The rhyme just seemed to fit the theme, glad you liked it.
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I enjoyed this.
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thank you, glad you enjoyed.
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best of wishes my dear friend
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thanks with the image prompt, I'm going to need it.
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